A very random poem! Enjoy.

2 thoughts on “A very random poem! Enjoy.”

  1. Thank you for the STARS post…really great.

    In this poem, I especially love the title & first stanza. Brilliant image of the swallow no longer a part of the middle sky among many other evocative lines. Great extended metaphor. Each time I read it, I like it more. The last line is lovely. Wonderful poem. Thank you.

    1. Why, thank you, Elizabeth! This is one of the nicest things anyone said about my poetry. I wrote this poem after I went kayaking in Charleston’s Folly Creek. The nature here is just beautiful. Thank you for commenting!

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